Description of someone and peer response by Alejandra

I´m going to talk about my beautiful cat. He is my baby, and he is like a little tiger. His name is Sam. He is white and brown with a soft coat.Although he is sometimes a bit asshole and lazy,he loves playing with me. My housemate and I picked him up from an animal protection when he was just a baby with two month.Even though he has a bent tail, it´s very funny to see it! I love him so much and I hope he will stay with me until he die.

Dear Riki, the text is great but it could be better with a little more of conexion between sentences. I also like to see a topic sentence. I know that your next text will be better than it, and that´s true that you´re going to improve your grammar skills a lot during the course. Good luck!